Redse7en's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Crying for Love [Passion]]

Nice

I love the sound of the first tune its almost like the acid sounds that are in fl sytrus or that other sound. You definately have the build up but I was expecting the song to get much harder after all of the build up. A fat drum piece would help it out. Also it seems like you have reverb and delay on all the other synths but at the end the last synth had no effects which made it kinda stand out a bit. It's up to you on how you wanna approach that but if I like to make a sound almost with no effects I still put a stereo effect on. Also watch out for certain synths. They might be able to play that certain note you want but sometimes it might not be able to play it well. All and all I enjoyed it. Great flash music.

~Red 7

Chaoz-of-Yakuza responds:

I get ya...thanks for the review...

[[TMM43]Rave[Final?]]

Liquid

All of the phaser and flanger on this song reminds me of something that deals with liquid... Sorta like a waterfall in a tropical rainforest. Overall the song is very nice. One thing I might sugguest is watching the peaking on the flangerized parts because at one point it overthrows everything. Simple drum beats that are very quiet make the listener pay attention to your melodie which in this case worked out. This song would be an excelent transitional song from one song to another. You almost could go back to this song and add something more hardcore at the end. I enjoyed it cause it gave me some nice visuals / ideas :D

~Red 7

TMM43 responds:

Thanks for your reivew Redse7en!
This reminds you of a liquid? OK! haha. I guess it could. This song reminds me of a lot of things, and yes, it is kind of like a liquid. xD
Thanks for the review!

[_-=[The Maestro's Requiem]=-_]

TT

You made me a sad panda today. Im dumb when it comes to classical music but if I were to choose you vs. some classical group who did music for starwars or the lord of the rings I'd choose you. Keep in touch please cause you give the best reviews I have ever received!

~Your friend
Red 7

MaestroSorrow responds:

Thank you Redse7en. I will definatly keep in touch. You make some excellent pieces yourself, I look forward to all your works. Do keep me up to date.

Thanks for the review.

[TRS-Marimba Mania!]

Hey

This song I agree is very nice in the beginning but once it gets in you can definately tell it's more of a midi song. Kinda takes away in a sence but still leaves you plenty of things you could come back to in the future. Origionality you have but I'd sugguest some effects and things to spice up your songs. Hope my reviewed helped. Keep working hard.

~Red 7

itsameyayo responds:

Yeah, originality is my best feature, but it does take a little to develop something from nothing. Effects? That will be noted! And the midi song part, man, that's been repeated, but that's alright. More afirmation is always nice : )

-Thanks for the review!

-SuperDrummer146

[Club Jump]

Great beats

Sorry it's been so long since I have reviewed anyone but here goes. I love the drum beat and the creeping up bass on it. It gives the sence of something ominous. Also it lets the listener decide if it's ambiant music or something they can dance to. It coulda done without the guitar in the end but some people like the guitar so it works both ways. Hope this helped. Keep them coming.

~Red 7

TheCon-Sept responds:

'm gonna end up mixing all my skills into a big piece one day. If anyone has the Justine Dance Mix CD please let me know. There is a certain track on that CD that I think is number 5 or 3 or something that I really liked. I lost the album off mycomputer and my sister has the CD... It was the only song I truly liked on the CD. I'm trying to copy the skills that DJ Had on that track.

If I do create an awsome track I would have to give credit to DJ's before me for giving me a stle to go by.

The artists I like have to be:
Sneaker Pimps
Prodigy
Freq Nasty
Tom Middleton
Elite Force
Omni Trio
Deep Blue
Moving Shadow
Guerilla Black
Franchise
Beastie Boys
and Atmosphere

if I hadn't listened to so many of these perfect mixes then I wouldn't have the skills i have today. I think I ought submit my very first track I created on FL3 (not FLStudio). Then you guys can see how I started... I think it was called techno bump or something. I'll upload it here in a bit. tell me what you think...

[GuilmonX-00002]

I hate one line summaries

Always need more room to write than one line with people heh. Not bad definately a true to the arts drum and bass piece. Sounds almost like prodigy in a way which I love. One thing I'd change is having the drums come in faster. Another would be adding some different elements to your song although might not be entirely nesessairy. I enjoyed it alot! Keep up your style.

~Red 7

TheCon-Sept responds:

Prodigy is what I listen to when I'm in my car... I feel a need for speed. Imagine going 80 down I40 down to Coors Blvd. But I am trying to make a beat that anyone can dance to. But as stated in the previous response I need a good snare drum to make a good drum roll before the second and 5th bump. of course the kicks in this beat go
Bump. Bump. Bump-Bump. Bump, bump,
Bump. Bump. Bump. Bump, bump,

I added another Bump-bump. to the second part to keep a rhythm going but the Hat still plays on the second -bump. part.

If you can find a good sample that would fit as a drum roll I would greatly appreciate it.

I will be submitting a new version of this soon after the drum roll is in place. (current Version Club Jump 3.)

In case you didn't know the reason why these are numbered now is because they are just concepts.

[TJS-Latino Casino]

=^..^= hehe

Well it does sound like a casino hehe. What I have to critique on is the need for a more origional synth. I don't know what program your running but since you mentioned FL before I will just say that your using that. Put some effects on your synths and try for a more intracate beat. Id like to hear a harder kick in this song. Other than that you get a 10 for originality cause of the melodie you came up with. It goes from light to dark which is pretty fun. I did that with my piece "While you are awake and asleep". Enjoyed it and keep working harder on your own style. Ill expect even better next time! hehe.

~Red 7

itsameyayo responds:

Thanks for the review! I'll bug you about a rating later, lol.

-SuperDrummer146

[Feral Fox - Frozen World]

Great work!

This is indeed you showing off to everyone that your skills have improved. Only one critique to give you which is that you have the talent to do amazing things. You need to set out and push yourself further! Other than that, I'm jelous that you got a freggin gold track within what 2 weeks? Your doing something right! Don't stop till your teeth shine platnum, and it blinds people to view your audio submissions lol!

Feral-Fox responds:

Eh I guess they improved alittle :p and dont be jelouse everyone has the power to do which they want if they try and stop putting themselfs down like I see a few do including myself. Your music has great potential man! And about the gold, yeah I wish I knew what was up with that, im not even that good at trance. Eh ill try and push harder if i can. Thanks for the nice review :p

[-Betrayal-]

Hey!

Like what Bob Barker said to Happy Gilmore... "I don't want a piece of it I want the whole thing!" Seriously if you were to elaborate on this more and put more time in it I would gaurentee you would have a bigger rep in ng! Great piece though! Sounds like it's the beginning of a song. Keep up the good work and happy song making!

~Red 7

Electronika responds:

Thanks! And I will make it longer... eventually.

[-Ambient Loop-]

Very nice!

I love ambient piece much more than some music because the fact that you can put them in flash easier. A great mood setter I must say! If I had to critique something then I would have to sugguest putting a reverb on the snare or maybe even a delay. Something like that would make it echo through the piece and give the beat more of an umph. Very nice work, I hope to see your scores get better because you deserve it!

Cheers!
~Red 7

Electronika responds:

Thanks! I'll take your suggestion into consideration when revising this. And I'm glad you liked it.